Writing Characters Appearances:
When Describing a Character
DO:
-Provide enough detail to give the reader a sense of the character’s physical appearance (When entering a new scene, or a fresh setting in RP, its important to explain your character thoroughly. Whether in T-1 or regular Roleplay its beyond important to remind those within the roleplay of your place and thusly what you as a character look like. Physicality’s like body type, eye color hair color and height are best explained in your opening post.)
-Highlight details that serve as clues to who the character is and perhaps what their life is like (Is your character an assassin? Are they a thief or a magician? What kind of purpose will their cloak serve in terms of the role you’ve discerned for them? This is why explaining, even subtly, what the character is wearing or who they are beneath the surface can lead to an all over better character in all told history. Even if it as simple as a dagger on their side, a gift from their mother, it gives quiet in depth to who this person is besides what you are showing them.)
-Describe clothing to establish character or when relevant to scene (Clothing is important in any character. Dressing for occupation, or comfort is another important part of being a role-player and deciding ones role. It wouldn’t make sense for a guard to be wearing jeans and a tee shirt in a medieval setting, like it wouldn’t be right to see a full plate in a futuristic setting. Dress for the world you’re in, unless your character is capable of explaining why they are where they are in the first play.)
DON’T:
-Go overboard with too many details or take up too much of the reader’s time describing one character. (Its all well and good to explain ones self, but no one wants to spend twenty minutes as you describe the flowing intensity of someone’s ginger locks over a potential nine paragraphs. Keep your descriptions short and sweet, and at the most, to the point, lest you seem long winded and lose the attention of your audience.
-Repetitively describe features or fixate on certain characteristics (We get it Edward Cullen, you’re a sexy beast… I know you shimmer like glistening diamonds, but there is more to you than that right? No? Well… At least you have a good personality… Or not… Long story short, we get how beautiful you are, or how buff and strong… But if you focus only on one thing for so long, you lose the attention of those around you. You can be like Gaston without a delightful following ego.)
-Describe clothing every time the character shows up unless its somehow relevant to the scene. (If you start a new scene every time you RP, its acceptable to do a brief summary of your clothing, but if every single post you go out of your way to explain the same outfit a few dozen times, you seem less like a role player and most of a designer… It’s best to explain once, and loosely breeze over the facts as necessary. As in your characters nail scratch as a loose thread on their jeans while fidgeting, or their chainmail clinks while they walk.
-Describe minor characters’ clothing in-depth unless it’s relevant. (Are you wearing striped boxers? Yes? But do we see them? Are they important to the overall plot? No. Unless you are about to do the do, or are having them yanked up your butt cheeks and over your head? Don’t bother mentioning them, as they are overall unimportant to the end all storyline and just end up taking the space which is unneeded.)
Choose a Focal Point:
It’s generally best to start from a particular piece on ones body and work your way around that part of oneself. From head to toe generally works best. Pulled between several sources of clothing, and then dropped into the vat as a secondary focus as they head downwards. Spreading out a description of ones character can add necessary overall meat to a post and leave on with a discerned personal benefit to the size of a post… Cover yourself in your first post rather than spreading it out over several posts so not to seem like you are adding as you go.
Describing Race and Ethnicity
Generally it can be a decidedly frustrating debate about what comes to and from the describing of ones race. If you prefer, you can state someone is Black, white, Hispanic, Native American, First Nations, Latino, Middle-Eastern, Asian, Pacific Islander and so on. As an important reminder, that races are made up of a variety of ethnic groups. Someone who is of a Native American descent could be of a variety tribes, or someone of Asian descent could be Korean, Japanese, Chinese or Vietnamese. If you’re describing a character whose ethnicity is unknown or not important to the plot, you could just say that they were Asian or Black, for example. But, the rest of the time you need to be clear about whether they are Chinese, Chinese American, Korean, etc. Also, remember that not all Black people are African-American, such as someone born in England or Haiti, for example.
You may instead choose to describe a character’s race through the color of their hair, eyes, and skin. It’s up to you which you feel most comfortable with and is most appropriate for your story. Just remember, if you describe one character’s skin color or otherwise make an issue of their race, you should describe every character’s skin color or race. If your character is of a homebrew variety the same rule applies, and should be kept in careful check when described.
Describing Clothing
As with a physical self, sometimes it’s easier to describe someone’s body, and clothing in the same post. Think about clothing that matches your roleplays time period and overall style. From Pants, shirts and coats, to the accessories, like ones hats, jewelry and shoes. Google can be ones best friend when it comes to find period specific garb for your character. By searching the time and place of your story plus a piece of your clothing
"Clothing in Victorian England"
"Clothing in 1960s New York"
"9th century Viking clothing"
Be sure to look for web sites that aren’t providing cheap Halloween costumes. Shops providing clothes for historical re-enactors are often very accurate. Tumblr can be a grand help when it comes to the overall lookup of historical accuracies and the like.
Resources for Garments and Accessories:Shirts
Trousers
Dress
Shorts
Panties
Swimsuit
Shoes
Coats and Jackets
Hats
Jewelry
Sunglasses
Sleeves, Necklines, Collars and Dress Types
Scarves for Men
Historical Clothing Resources:
OMG That Dress!
Period Fabric
Amazon Dry Goods
Reconstructing History
Historic Threads
Historical Costume Inspiration
History of Costume: European Fashion Through the Ages
Women's Fashion Through the Years
Clothing in the Ancient World
Clothing in Ancient Rome
Clothing in Biblical TimesVintage Fashion Guild
Reproduction FabricsFabrics and Trims
Vintage Fabrics
Fur and Skins
Fashion Timeline 1800-1990
18th Reference Book List
Clothing Reference Book List
Costume Gallery
Modern Clothing Reference
Clothes on Pinterest
Polyvore
Fashion Dictionary
This is a Fashion Blog
What I Wore
Fashion is Endless
Physical Details Resources
Women's Body Shapes
Men's Body Shapes
Face Shapes
Realistic Eye Shape Chart
Facial Hair Types
How to Describe Women's Hair Lengths
The Ultimate Haircut Guide for Women
A Primer on Men's Hairstyles
Hair Color
Obsidian Bookshelf Hair Color
Obsidians Bookshelf Eye Color
Skin Color Chart
Curl and Texture Chart
Writing with Color: Guide to Skin Color, Part I and Part II